#1
-Repentant-

Verse 1
Living days to the fullest, my soul ill keep
my empty faith taken away from me
Selfreliant with strength then i fall down
Cant remember the days when i even knew how, to believe

Chorus
And I am repentant to you
All the things you said, i dont regret to say they're true
I worship you

Verse 2
I willingly just throw myself to you
Use me as you please, all you want to do
Warmth of a father, i run to you alone
Having pleasure in giving you my all

Chorus
And I am repentant to you
All the things you said, i dont regret to say they're true
I worship you

Special
I worship you
I worship you
I worship you

I worship you
I worship you
only you

End Chorus (fades away)
And I am repentant to you
All the things you said, i dont regret to say they're true


Hey, i know its not really good but im workin on it. Thanks
#2
Not quite sue I understand the beginning. The wording is a bit vague, and kind of halting.

Why not try this for line three:
Self-reliant on strength when I fall down



I like this line a lot:
All the things you said, i dont regret to say they're true
#3
Thanks for the feedback.


Self-reliant on strength when I fall down

I really like that, thanks.