Poll: asda
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red
6 86%
blue
1 14%
green
1 14%
Voters: 7.
#1
Winner goes through to finals. Multi-vote. In case of a tie... both proceed.

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---"Fall out"---

Leave me with the heartbeat, you once wore on your sleeve,
Take me back to the moments where I listened to you breathe,
Hear your whispers in the distance, saying you're all I need,
Yet these pictures that I carry, let the memories freeze,
Driven by what you gave me, you still stole my heart,
Though we promised each forever,
when does eternity start?
I would walk through Hell,
Yeah, just to tell,
You. I never felt,
This way before.

So watch me as I fall for you just one more time,
Dress me with your love, and I'll make you mine
Fall out, fall out or one more chance is all I ask,
And if that isn't possible, let me stay in the past,
Fall out. Fall out.
Fall out of love with you.
Fall out, Fall out,
Fall out of love with you.

Take my heart into your gentle hands,
Kiss me softly, the way I know you can
It's been far too long since I could stand,
Because you gave me reason to be a man,
Drift away, while I face these demons,
Sleep awake, while I dream of you,
Wrapped in the sheets of your lovely wings,
Adorned with Heaven, you were my queen,

So watch me as I fall for you just one more time,
Dress me with your love, and I'll make you mine
Fall out, fall out or one more chance is all I ask,
And if that isn't possible, let me stay in the past,
Fall out. Fall out of love with you.
Fall out, Fall out,
Fall out of love with you.



---Beast---

Verse 1
RAW!
a burning in my heart,
A fire in my soul,
Like a wounded beast,
I crawl into my hole,
All I feel is rage,
Someone let me free,
from my cage,
I can't begin,
(drums)
This creature within,

chorus
I am the beast,
thrown aside by society,
I am the beast,
From this trap I am free,
From these rage filled,
blood shot eyes,
I can not see,
What is wrong with me?!

Verse 2
domestic animal,
under human control,
these primitive urges to fight,
Devouring snarling aggression,
bloody fangs from when I bite,
So fearful of me,
I'm so angry at you,
So lock up your home and,
tell your children it just isnt true,
but you ly awake at night,
knowing I'm coming for you,

[chorus]

Verse 3
we are afraid of things that cannot be explained,
this monster inside,
Is causing me pain,
I only can see,
that this beast is taking over me,
reverting to past instincts,
This change is not my will,
so many people,
that this beast must kill

[chorus]

bridge
Growling!
Snarling!
Howling!
I'm an animal,
What's inside of me?
What could this demon be?
Aggression,
Anger,
Rage,
I can't control it,
mindless killing,
So many people that I bit,
I want to,
turn away and let me,
DIE!
in sin,
A grievance to all,
let my mangled cursed body fall,
DIE!
I have to,
DIE!
it wont let me,
DIE!
What am I?!

[chorus x 2]



---untitled---

verse 1:
right then i gave it all
to do just what i could call
a day full of laughter and fun
we never want to be done

we were all just sittin around
just about to go downtown
grabed our boards and hitched a ride
straight down highway 485

verse 2:
one thing we had to do
find some were that was totally new
didnt care what those cops had to say
we were gana skate all d@mn day

chorus:
life's all about havin fun
we want to live fast and die young
we don't care what you people say
were gana so it our own way


verse3:
we never live in the past
life goes by oh so fast
we went and had our fun
now every things said and done


chorus:
life's all about havin fun
we want to live fat and die young
we don't care what you people say
were gana so it our own way
yea were gana do it our own way
#2
Of all the ones here, Red used sense stress the best. And of all of them, it abused it the most. Reading though those lines meant you'd have to read quickly, but it still connected, and showed that the writer was aware of the need for sense stress.
#3
I voted red. It wasn't particularly original, but still: red.
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