I would be very thankful if you guy's could give me some feed back and tell what needs to be worked on here


The song is in my profile it's the only song there
Ok, so the rhythm is a good start to something fun! But the drums need to go away!! Seriously, I think if you keep it up and maybe take some drum lessons or find a decent drummer, you'll be on the right track. Or you can try recording without the drums for a while till you or whoever, get's a little better.

Keep it up though. It's nice to see young people kickin some ass!!


crit this if you have the time.

The drums gotta go. They are awful. Sorry. Everything else sounded great though man keep it up. And go get you a good steak.. you deserve it.