#1
Here's my bass cover for Interstate Love Song by Stone Temple Pilots. The bass can't be heard that well in some parts because I had the microphone next to the speaker that was playing the song. Enjoy anyway. I'll happily crit anyone else's work in return

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=djyvki7K4VM
#2
You did well man. My only word of advice is that the first bend in the main riff should be a little stronger, it's a tad weak, but nothin' to get all worked up about.
Hey it would be cool if you return the favor.
How's my bass playing in my band?
The link is in my sig.
Heavy Hand or Eraser Marks is pretty bass heavy.
Thanks man.
And great job.