#2
I know this isn't really a crit forum but I gotta say that the drumming makes it sounds forced and generic (the blast beats).

Otherwise, it's not too bad.
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#3
^ Actually dude thats the purpose of this forum

anyhoo, the growls were very impressive, i liked them, but the guitar work was generic and uninspiring tbh.
#4
I agree with what everyone else said.
Your vocals were good. Your guitar work, while not terrible, was just 'meh' in the sense that it's generic, like ch715dallat said. Did you use a drum program for your songs? It sounds very artificial, and took away from the song, in my opinion.
#5
Yeah man just ideas at the moment though need to find some members to help haha
Yea i use ezdrummer to programme them, ive only had it a while so im still yet to master it
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#6
Ahh, that explains it. It's a good start, just needs more refinement. I'm sure if you had more members to bounce ideas around, it would shape up to be quite a good band!