#1
Hey, this is one of my first songs so please comment on anything i can change. Thanks


-Repentant-

Verse 1
Living days to the fullest, my soul ill keep
my empty faith taken away from me
Self-reliant on strength when I fall down
Cant remember the days when i even knew how, to believe

Chorus
And I am repentant to you
All the things you said, i dont regret to say they're true
I worship you

Verse 2
I willingly just throw myself to you
Use me as you please, all you want to do
Warmth of a father, i run to you alone
Having pleasure in giving you my all

Chorus
And I am repentant to you
All the things you said, i dont regret to say they're true
I worship you

Special
I worship you
I worship you
I worship you

I worship you
I worship you
only you

End Chorus
And I am repentant to you
All the things you said, i dont regret to say they're true
#2
Id try and throw in a specific biblical reference. And change "Warmth of a faher" to "warmth of the Father", just to throw in that god reference. But i really like it. Right along my style of writing. Definitely good for being one of your first pieces