#1
This is an unfinished piece of work. I thought I would add the chords with this one so you could get the feel for the song.

Any thoughts or comments would be greatly appreciated.


[U]Here We Are

Amaj7
Here we are again
Dmaj7
Just the two of us
Amaj7-------------------------Dmaj7
Reminiscing times gone by

Amaj7
Here we are again
Dmaj7
Sitting on this beach
Amaj7---------------------------------------Dmaj7
Where we wrote our names in the sand

Chorus
C#m--------------------Dmaj9
Our love is so...... real
C#m
Like a sweet melody
Dmaj9----------------------Amaj7
On a cooling summer breeze

Amaj7, Dmaj7 (x2)

Amaj7
Here we are again
Dmaj7
Playing in the park
Amaj7-------------------Dmaj7
We're a little older now

Amaj7
Here we are again
Dmaj7
Maybe a drink or two
Amaj7-----------------------------------Dmaj7
share a thought that makes us cry

Chorus
C#m-------------------Dmaj9
Our love is so..... real
C#m
Like a sweet melody
Dmaj9----------------------Amaj7
On a cooling summer breeze
#2
i thought it was pretty good. I liked the imagery and it was put together quite nicely (if that's a word). Thx for critting mine. Just to make a clarification about the chorus incase you were wondering:
Not seeing Death's second side death's second side is a metaphor for sleep
Looking for a place to hide this is portraying my wanting to hide my girlfriend for fear of getting ripped on. and believe me, i have.
etc.
going back to yours, i really liked it. I feel like it was a bit cliche sometimes, but its hard not to be cliche with love songs these days. And just so you know, there's a breaking benjamin song on their cd phobia called here we are. but other than that i liked it a lot.