#1
So, here comes a lyric i've written..... I hope you all like it!


Someone's here, I can still feel it.
Everyone's staring!
Someone's here, I can still hear it.
No more pain, suffering in my heart,
No one seems to go there,
In that beautiful place, where everyone's
hiding.....


The winter will come, and the rest will leave out,
The morning sun will fade, and once again, the snow
melts away my pain.


Look at me, Look at me,
take a look what I've done?
My pain can't go away,
I have to stay,

In this horrible place,
through the winter,
Through the snow,
through the frozen tears
that have been gone.


The winter will come, and the rest will leave out,
The morning sun will fade, and once again, the snow
melts away my pain.
#2
Not bad man. maybee extend a lil. something about being numb by the cold would fit in well somewhere with the hidden emotionless winter kinda theme
#3
Read the rules of the forum before you post, especially regarding titles.

You can repost this after you do that.
This is not a pipe