#1
This is another metalcore song my band is working on. Need some help editing and with some ideas...Thanks as always guys.
Attachments:
Jack Daniels Makes Me Emotional.zip
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
#2
hmmm

some of the breakdowns get a bit repetitive. and it could do with some rearanging to make it flow better. also, some of the breakdowns are a bit too stacatto for my liking. but its a decent song, and it's more original than i was expecting.
My name is Danny. Call me that.
#3
Thanks for the compliments. Yeah I know it still needs work, i've only put a couple hours into it. And the breakdowns I wrote to be repetitive hardcore kids go crazy in our town for that stuff. Thanks though dude.
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470