May be a bit boring for the majority of it but it isn't very long. I'd like to hear your comments on how to improve the multi-instrumental bit right at the end in particular!

Crit for crit of course

Thank you
Pretty nice, catchy sounding song man.

It sounds like on the second part where the other guitar comes in you're not fretting the notes all the way or something though...the part sounds good though. It does drag on for a bit too.

The multi-instrument part gets kind of muddled, but you're definitely on the right track with it. Just try to tighten everything up and get the parts together and it'll sound really cool.