Hi, I've created two songs and I'd like to know what others think about it.
Also comments about what I could change and what I could do better for next songs are welcome!

The first song is very short, and is some kind of Pop Punk, I think. Basically it's just
an intro, 2 times the chorus and an outro. (Probably could make this one a bit longer.)

The second song is a song I really can't tell what genre it is. Well, you'll see what it's like! ^-^

Here you go! (GP4, GP5 and MIDI of both songs are in zip file)
hey i liked the second one it rocked pretty hardcore but, the first one wasnt the greatest, the mixing of some sounds just didnt go well with me. but the second one you should now record on guitar
fender strat
fender acoustic
line6 spider 2 150 watt
can of, rock your face off

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