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This is a new song I'm working on. Tell me what you think. It's called Taunting Fatality (I might change the name though).

Verse 1:

Something has gotten a hold of me
Controlling me, pulling my leash
Telling me it's everything that I need
Convincing myself and all those around me

Chorus:

You want me
Come find me
I won't be here forever
You failed me!
I won't be here much longer
The idea of fatality is killing me

Verse 2:

It's taunting me!
Beating me down and haunting me
Why can't you see!
My time has come
So I must surrender to thee

Chorus

Bridge:

Every day I die inside
It's picking me apart until I die
One by one
This is a murder of no usual kind
So kill....the....pain
Seize....this....day!

Chorus x2

Outro (x4):

This must soon end
But you don't even try...
Quote by NGD1313
Well I don't know about solos but how about that Smoke on the Water riff. It's like...impossible.


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I'm Jake. I'm a musician, philosopher, and exhibitionist.