#1
[Intro-esqe thing]
Could i ever really,
mean so much to you?
all the pictures i've burned,
and all that you've put me through

[Verse 1]
Back in the day,
when you actually cared,
I really sweared,
that there was something there

But that was then,
and this is now,
and I swear this'll end,
even if it kills me somehow

[Chorus x2]
"Through all,
In thick and thin,"
never seemed,
so useless to me,

Since it seems,
there just must,
be nothing,
to see


"Through all,
In thick and thin,"
never seemed,
so useless to me,

Since it seems,
there just must,
be nothing,
to see

[Verse 2]
Your silly games,
really mean,
nothing,
to me

But who knows,
maybe one day,
I'll set me,
free

Cause after all,
In that hall,
I'd never felt so angry

That i could,
or just should,
have left you,
long ago,

[Chorus x2]
"Through all,
In thick and thin,"
never seemed,
so useless to me,

Since it seems,
there just must,
be nothing,
to see

"Through all,
In thick and thin,"
never seemed,
so useless to me,

Since it seems,
there might just,
be nothing left,
to see

[Bridge]
And when i thought,
you couldnt get much worse
you shoved your conscience,
into my hearse

[Ending/Outro]
Maybe,
you open your eyes,
and see

That theres more to do,
than just helping yourself

It's a,
distinct possibility,
that its meaningless,
to me.
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#2
[Intro-esqe thing]
Could i ever really,
mean so much to you?
all the pictures i've burned,
and all that you've put me through

[Verse 1]
Back in the day,
when you actually cared,
I really sweared,
that there was something there

But that was then,
and this is now,
and I swear this'll end,
even if it kills me somehow -till now its simply good


[Chorus x2]
"Through all,
In thick and thin,"
never seemed,
so useless to me,

Since it seems, - didn't get it
there just must,
be nothing,
to see


"Through all,
In thick and thin,"
never seemed,
so useless to me,

Since it seems,
there just must,
be nothing,
to see

[Verse 2]
Your silly games,
really mean,
nothing,
to me

But who knows,
maybe one day,
I'll set me,
free

Cause after all,
In that hall,
I'd never felt so angry

That i could,
or just should,
have left you,
long ago,

[Chorus x2]
"Through all,
In thick and thin,"
never seemed,
so useless to me,

Since it seems,
there just must,
be nothing,
to see

"Through all,
In thick and thin,"
never seemed,
so useless to me,

Since it seems,
there might just,
be nothing left,
to see

[Bridge]
And when i thought,
you couldnt get much worse
you shoved your conscience,
into my hearse

[Ending/Outro]
Maybe,
you open your eyes,
and see

That theres more to do,
than just helping yourself

It's a,
distinct possibility,
that its meaningless,
to me.


in all , u have simple rhythm scheme which could be easily fitted in any kind of genre,
it could be a great song , require some tweaking and more catchy chorus.
ur verse too good