#1
Its in my profile. What scales do you think will fit? I have been using G minor so far.

I know that any scale can be used to fit (to a certain extent) but i have really been in a rut with this song.

Also what do you think will fit next? A solo? going back to the piano part?

I was personally thinking the piano part (vocals kick in here) and then go to a solo-type-thing.

Please help meh!
#2
well, if that's where vocals kick in, i say you should make up some new riff for the verse, so the piano thing will stay special, and you can return to it later as some sort of bridge.
I personally think a solo would fit in better here than vocals, and the vocals can enter later.


Oh, and it's really cool.
#3
Just bust of some melodic lead work man. Big expressive bends and slides and stuff.
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#5
Thanks for the help guys.

PS i made the intro allot better. A much better build up to the guitar.

When i get back from my holiday i will mix what i have so far and see what you think then.
#6
Ok i am back from my holiday to sunny Queensland.

Now... I couldn't bring my guitar so the song hasn't been changed or added to at all and i was to busy to start the lyrics.

Where do i go from here? write the backing guitar first and write the lyrics so they fit over the guitar?
Or should i do the lyrics now and the guitar later?

What scale do you think will fit it? when i first started writing i was just playing chords on a keyboard until something sounded good.

And finally, any tips on writing lyrics? This would be my first attempt

Thanks.