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Hmm... I wonder if i'll get any crits this time around... Anyways, i had to wrote this song because i'm gonna perform it this saturday (maybe), but it'll undergo a lot of changes after that, because i'm not happy with it at all... But i'm eager to see what you have to say...

In The Wake

We are so lost
I just found out
But here we are
Making our path
With wide open eyes
That see everithing
We walk through this world
Feeling our way

I've been awake for so long now
But i've never felt more aware
Worn to waste, we're so weary
But i've never felt more awake

We aren't broken
This can be fixed
But hear my voice
Make me your flame
With a wide open heart
A sea that's endless
Walk me through this world
With our eyes shut

I've been awake for so long now
But i've never felt more aware
Worn to waste, we're so weary
But i've never felt more awake

In this darkness
Things are clearer
We are soundless
Yet i hear you
Marred emotion
Breathless ocean
Lifeless notion
Endless

I've been awake for so long now
But i've never felt more aware
Worn to waste, we're so weary
But i've never felt more awake
Last edited by AmplifySilence at Jul 7, 2008,