During the verse of the first one, I don't like the whole palm-muted note-after-note thing. At the fast part of the solo, explorer-boy just kinda plays the same riff, which gets boring. Doesn't do anything for the interlude, so it's just a dead spot. I'd just suggest learning some new riffs and pushing them in the improv. Otherwise, good job, he didn't get ahead of himself and screw up anything.

LP boy makes the verses boring to by simply playing the chord. Again, not too well on the solo, wah isn't all that great.

Overall, I like the first one better, simply 'cause of his tone and lack of mistakes. Though I understand not everyone can get great mics.