#1
PUPPET ON A STRING

Verse:
You controll me like a puppet
allways pullin' on my strings
I can't make my own choices
Cuz' you always seem to know what's best for me

One of these days I'm gonna snap
So you better watch your back
Like a cornered animal I'm prone to attack
You better think again if you don't think I'll fight back

(this part monotonely yelled) You think you got!!!

Chorus:
Total controll, over my soul
I can't do a thing, I'm just a puppet on a string

Verse2:
When will you learn that respect is earned
And I will show my respect to those deserving

End for now... Still need to write the rest of a second verse if you got any ideas for it please share 'em. CRIT 4 CRIT!!
With an irresistible blend of reggae induced hip-hop and catchy pop-punk hooks, Half Chance Heroes captivates audiences with their unique sound and energetic stage show. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T8bSU0u8uvM
Last edited by Descendent-182 at Jul 8, 2008,
#2
thatd be really good for some hardcore **** like old ssd and such. great lyrics and meaning but the title "puppet on a string" was also used by government issue (a dc hardocre band) just a heads up. great lyrics i love it.
#3
thanks a million I'll send you the song when it's done if you want. It will be done really soon. peace...
With an irresistible blend of reggae induced hip-hop and catchy pop-punk hooks, Half Chance Heroes captivates audiences with their unique sound and energetic stage show. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T8bSU0u8uvM
#4
not bad
you might need to do some editing to make it rhyme better
or make some different line breaks or something
Reaching for the sun
one may forget
the feet which
ground him