#1
This is the newest song I wrote. The flow may seem a little weird in some spots but trust me, it works. Comments are appreciated. Thanks!

EDIT: idk if you guys can read the starred parts but heres my key: s-word, damn, f-word...lmao yeah idk how else to do it soooo...

don't waste your days dreaming
make whats real a reality
don't sit back and wait your turn
act on what your feeling

who knows whos next in line
the invisibly dull
positively unknown
**** damn **** i just need more time

unwind and relax a little bit
you've got time to make it this christmas
two years obliviously pass
where am i i'm obviously last

you'll hold on to what your feeling
because you are completely stalling
excuses keep on clouding your head
but what do you do when your led

astray onto a road
far away
so damn cold
people hurt
broken past
where am i i'm obviously last

rewind and change your last nights pitch
you're next in line not last on the list
two summers that you've taken back
pondering the past now you can laugh

the invisibly dull
positively unknown
**** damn **** i just need more time
#2
Quote by JordanRRR


don't waste your days dreaming
make whats real a reality
don't sit back and wait your turn
act on what your feeling

The second line doesn't work for me.. isn't what's real already a reality?

who knows whos next in line
the invisibly dull
positively unknown
**** damn **** i just need more time

Are you telling me that you are saying S*** damn F***?! That should be changed.

unwind and relax a little bit
you've got time to make it this christmas
two years obliviously pass
where am i i'm obviously last


you'll hold on to what your feeling
because you are completely stalling
excuses keep on clouding your head
but what do you do when your led

astray onto a road
far away
so damn cold
people hurt
broken past
where am i i'm obviously last

rewind and change your last nights pitch
you're next in line not last on the list
two summers that you've taken back
pondering the past now you can laugh

the invisibly dull
positively unknown
**** damn **** i just need more time



I don't know, I just can't seem to grasp the concept of this song, maybe if I heard a MP3 or something but it just isn't flowing. Overall, the first verse was my fave.
#3
make whats real a reality

that line meant make whats real in your mind and your dreams actually come true.. its real to you already, you just have to make it be.

and yes i do mean **** damn ****.. i like swearing and its fun. everyone should swear everyday in every sentence. **** yeah!