#1
As the title says, it is now complete.

Enjoy.

Goredit: It is finished, finished product is a few posts down V V V
Attachments:
Simple.zip
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

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cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
Last edited by Slaytanic1993 at Jul 9, 2008,
#2
That was really nice, I really liked that one riff with the slide, and the acoustic part was really good. The only thing I would have done differently is that it seemed as if the part in the beginning with the higher lead seemed to be repeated too much, but only a little bit and it was minor. I did however like how you sort of restated the idea in a different way in the end.
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#3
That was cool, I definitely caught an Agalloch vibe in the leads and acoustics. The only things I could really recommend you doing is to perhaps fancify the leads a little, like a resolving trill at the fourth bar, possibly some harmonization, etc. etc. Perhaps an acoustic rhythm playing underneath a distortion one could benefit here as well. The transition from distortion to acoustic was choppy, but the acoustic section was cool. The end of what you have so far almost sounds death metal-ish, and I was taken aback a little.

Oh, and get Guitar Pro.

I bet your sick of hearing that, huh.

My song coming up soon...
#4
Many thanks, and I put in a trill at the first lead, only because it would've sounded odd in the others (IMO).

I already wrote some more riffs and acoustic bits for it. This song might go on for about a minute or longer, as well.
Attachments:
SimpleAlmostFinished.zip
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#5
I finished it. Enjoy it.
Attachments:
SimpleFinished.zip
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#6
I wasn't so sure about the tremolo picked key change section, but everything else after that was cool. Very Opeth-esque, which surprised me as I definitely wasn't it expecting it.

I think the second acoustic section had potential to be expanded, with possibly a clean lead over it.