#1
I read once to write down everything that comes to you. This happened to come to me I wrote it down and shaped it up. Enjoy : )


Taking ****s,
On Friday nights
Sucks so bad,
But feels so right

No one knows,
Just where you are
They don't see you,
But see your car
Little do the people know,
It is coming out so slow

It hurts so bad,
You hold the scream
Suck it in,
Just like a dream
Do just what your father said,
Be a man and use your hand

No one knows,
Just where you are
They don't see you,
But see your car
And now all of the people know,
The brown spots, they are not play-doh

Taking ****s,
On Friday nights
Feels so good,
But ruins lives
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#4
lol i laughed, that was kinda funny.
way to brighten up my day man
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Mr Cuddles pretty much nailed it...

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#6
that ALSO made me laugh. smart but simple down to the point lyrics. now can you crit my lyircs? it's in my sig.
#8
martinez, if I do crit your lyrics (which will be lucky) it will be just as lame as what you did here. Don't leave a short ass comment that really doesn't say anything and then tell/ask me to crit yours....k? thanks for the others though... I thought I might be the only one to find humor in this haha
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