#2
Hey, I enjoyed that. The melody is very nice, I can hear a small amount of drums there in my mind. The solo part over the rhytm is a little repetitive, however, if you add some keyboards and drums or something in the background I think it'll all fit very nicely. Overall, good melody and a nice song.

Goo job!


Wadester


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#3
I really liked it, I probably could never think of something like that. Very cool melody, though I do agree with wadester, it was a little repetitive. I think some drums and sound effects could do it some good, but it was a very nice song overall. I didn't hear any digital interference in the background, maybe it's just your computer or something. I will probably listen to it again! Could you take a look at my profile (it's in my sig)? Thanks!
#4
There are some lyrics to the song (but i can't sing and i need a condenser mic) so that might take away from the repetitiveness of the song.
#5
Quote by crazymac
There are some lyrics to the song (but i can't sing and i need a condenser mic) so that might take away from the repetitiveness of the song.


You're right, some vocals would definitely give it some more interest. But as it is, interesting chords, nice playing, I can't hear any interference or noise either so I think that must be your speakers or something...oh and as for drums, I think it could easily stand without them if you had some vocals in there, but hey if you have anybody who's rhythmically inclined willing to do something with it give it a go and see how it turns out...nice song though, enjoyed it.
#7
Right away the first notes immediately make me think of the song Brown Eyed Girl. It kind of has that feel throughouut the song. I agree that vocals will take the repetitiveness right out of it haha so yea you should lay down some Bass/drums/vocal tracks on it, very enjoyable.

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