#1
its pretty self explanatory hate song, intended for a metal band, would appreciate what you thought of it, pros and cons, also any title suggestions

so is this the same old story that i find so ****ing hard to read
iv gone from a king to a peasant wasting whilst i slowly bleed
youve tore out my heart and left me stranded here in two
you treat me like a fool yet id gladly play the fool for you
i saw the angel come from heaven just to throw me down to hell
my life went upside down since i fell under your spell
beneath your beauty lies a hatred i could never know
i try to fight it but i crave for you, you self righteous *****

all this time i felt i had something to fight for
something to hold on to when i heard your name
im looking into darkness which seems to go on forever
im lurking in the shadows wishing we could be together

with every word you say, the words cut my heart away
im left with hatred for the love that we once shared each day
i take another drink to erase these memories from my head
il try and il always fail its easier to dream that you are dead
i tried to find the truth when i looked deep in your eyes
all i saw were broken promises disguise in one big lie
so my hands are broken, and my tonge is tied
i feel my chest burst open but feel no pain inside

all this time i felt i had something to fight for
something to hold on to when i heard your name
im looking into darkness which seems to go on forever
im lurking in the shadows wishing we could be together

so my hands are broken, and my tonge is tied
i feel my chest burst open but feel no pain inside
#3
Pop Tart
cause a pop tart just pops up when you dont expect it too (ie love)
when you bit into a pop tart, it looks like it is filled with good stuff, but there is nothing there.
( ie i feel my chest burst open but feel no pain inside)
音乐是生活
Music is Life


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#4
I play guitar in a very love/hate oriented metal band, and i believe a fitting title would be "fading memories shall perish".