Your guitar playing has some nice ideas but your timing is a bit off. You might want to work with a metronome to get the timing down. Your singing needs some work, as it doesn't sound like you're singing from your diaphram, there is no "body" to it, and because of that your sustained notes fall flat. Learning to vibrato will help with that as well. I liked "A Wasted Life," nice lyrics there.
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man all guitars are female. if they werent you couldn't make sweet love to them with your fingers. ok somebody better quote that ****. thats like quantum guitar **** rite there.