Poll: You know what to do
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Blue
8 53%
Red
7 47%
Voters: 15.
#1
The Least You Could Do

Alone and empty, he gives into tears
Broke down and helpless
Came true has his worst fear

He begged her not to go
Never to leave his side
Now they will never know
What could have been of their lives

Yeah take a good look
Open your eyes
Charish who you have
THey may not always be by your side
When life seems hard, pull yourself through
For all the ones you love
It's the least you could do

Shattered and scared
For the beatings to sop, so badly she longs
As the marks turn black and blue
Soon her life will be gone

Hes been drinking again, he feels so tough
She can't take it any longer
Enough is enough
Behind her she leaves a husband and son
In an instant it's all gone
All that remains is the echo of the gun

Yeah take a good look
Open your eyes
Charish who you have
THey may not always be by your side
When life seems hard, pull yourself through
For all the ones you love
It's the least you could do

Yeah it's the least you could do



Unwanted

All alone again as fear begins to settle in
I tremble fervently as the sound of chattering teeth
fill the dark hallway, and my breathing grows heavy
Touching the wall for direction, I start to walk
Lightning outlines the silhouettes of furniture
Leaving the hall darker than what it was before

I hear voices whispering from the bottom of the steps
A knot clots my throat as I begin my descent
"Who, who's there," my voice tries to bellow out
But this voice squeaks only a whisper
Not even enough to startle an intruder

At the end, there was no one there
Just running footsteps emanating from the kitchen
I pinch myself hoping to God this is a nightmare
But reality begins to set in

Sweat beads down my brow and my palms clammy
Lightning illuminates the dining room,
and the loud crack of thunder frightens me
I thought I saw a shadow
But it may be my imagination, I hope

In the kitchen now, and no one to be found
I look for the light switch, but lightning struck again
There was someone there and my fist went flying
It struck the window breaking and lacerating my hand

I cry out in pain, WAIT!
There is some one behind me
I turn to look, but...darkness
Vivamus mea Lesbia, atque amemus,
rumoresque senum seueriorum
omnes unius aestimemus assis!
Last edited by Eaglestalon101 at Jul 10, 2008,
#2
Red, but on both poems the grammer was teribble, and i didn't find either to be amazing.
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#5
Hey guys, I put a link to this in the polls thread.
In the future drop a link there when you post a 1v1, k?

also, you should indicate how many points you're playing for.


good luck, to both.
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#6
^^^My bad
Vivamus mea Lesbia, atque amemus,
rumoresque senum seueriorum
omnes unius aestimemus assis!
#7
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Hey guys, I put a link to this in the polls thread.
In the future drop a link there when you post a 1v1, k?

also, you should indicate how many points you're playing for.


good luck, to both.


I added how many points were playing for
#8
I had to go with blue because i found it had better rhythm. Red had some neat imagery at first, especially the "Touching the wall for direction" part, but i found it lost most of its flow after the start. Good work though I enjoyed the reading
To see a World in a Grain of Sand
And a Heaven in a Wild Flower
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand
And Eternity in an hour
#9
You beat me at the very last second, good job
Vivamus mea Lesbia, atque amemus,
rumoresque senum seueriorum
omnes unius aestimemus assis!
#10
Thanks to everyone who voted for me and to Eaglestalon for a great match up.

Not bad for my first time.
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