#1
This is something i threw together in about a half-hour because i wanted to write something so it's probably pretty bad. ive got a guitar part to match but i dont know how to put that up so oh well. please leave comments, good or bad, and be honest.


"Teach Me"

(Verse 1)
I'm nothing more than someone,
Never really had a name,
Just hiding in the shadows, crying for someone,
You're the only one that ever came, so

(Chorus)
Teach me like I've never been taught before,
Teach me how to open all of life's locked doors,
Teach me to be true, down to the core, and
Teach me everything you know, then teach me more

(Verse 2)
For the first time I feel I belong,
No more reason to hide,
I know that nothing can go wrong,
As long as you are by my side, while you

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
If I lost everything but you tonight,
I wouldn't mind,
Because you can

(Chorus- But quieter, and without instruments)

(Chorus- Normal)

(Outro)
You taught me to live,
And in turn taught yourself to love.


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#2
its nice that 40 something people looked at this and nobody left anything. thanks guys
Quote by chamill4u
Also, start inconspicuously humping the nearest immobile object while darting your eyes back and forth suspiciously. Works best if the nearest immobile object is also the nearest person.



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#3
I liked this, don't really know what music style would suit it best,
But I like the lyrics, especially th chorus, which seems to flow well.
But don't post and then start complaining when noone comments.
Just write more, someone will feel like they have to say something eventually.
#4
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its nice that 40 something people looked at this and nobody left anything. thanks guys
You got more than you earned.

in January, you posted 2 threads and got multiple comments and crits on both,
yet you failed to return a crit or comment to ANYONE, even though one of the people commenting on yours specifically asked you to.

if you want crits and comments, the best way to get them is to GIVE them to others.
in any case, bumping is not allowed.


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