#1
The song is called "Betrayed" it's in my profile

Check it Out

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Mikeboss/


please give some constuctive critism

it's a bit short but really soothing

Mike
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Last edited by Mikeboss at Jul 11, 2008,
#2
dude, i love it, so many melodies intertwining! its great really great!!!!!!!!!!!
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#4
This is pretty awesome man. Make it longer, it would be really sweet.

As far as critting...if you make it longer, some drums would go very nicely with it. Otherwise, it's very good. I can't say too much about it.
#5
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Really cool. Is that a keyboard?


yeah even though it doesn't show its done by MIDI the piano
(i'm just starting to learn it myself LOL)
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#6
Tis nice. I agree with the lengthening + drums comment. Stick a nice beat in when the high melody line comes in and you're laughing.

Not entirely sure I like the tone of the high part though, sounds a bit too harsh. Doesn't quite sit with the feel of the rest of the song