#1
First Song i've ever written, thanks for critiqueing .

Verse 1
We've been through it all.
And we have the scars to show.
I tried so hard.
But you just ignored it all.

Chorus
But the journey we've come, has been so long.
But you were worth every scar.
It's taken some time for you to realize,
That you mean so much to me.

Verse 2
My heart has been ripped in shreds,
And now it's almost dead.
But then you said "I love you."
And all is resurrected.

Chorus
But the journey we've come, has been so long.
But you were worth every scar.
It's taken some time for you to realize,
That you mean so much to me.

Verse 3
Now I'm stitched up with your love.
I was lost, but now I'm found
I would climb this mountain for you,
Until I reached the blue.
All for you....
#2
Verse 1
We've been through it all.
And we have the scars to show.
I tried so hard.
But you just ignored it all.
(Good intro verse. Seems slightly aggressive, but still kinda mellow)

Chorus
But the journey we've come, has been so long.
But you were worth every scar.
It's taken some time for you to realize,
That you mean so much to me.
(The chorus seems a little weak. No particular rhyme scheme or stand out lines. Perhaps if you changed "has been so long" with "has come so far" it might flow a little bit better. Just an opinion though)

Verse 2
My heart has been ripped in shreds,
And now it's almost dead.
But then you said "I love you."
And all is resurrected.
(This is the best line of the song, for sure)

Chorus
But the journey we've come, has been so long.
But you were worth every scar.
It's taken some time for you to realize,
That you mean so much to me.

Verse 3
Now I'm stitched up with your love.
I was lost, but now I'm found
I would climb this mountain for you,
Until I reached the blue.
All for you....
(Its a good outro line. Definitly finishes, change in song mood)

Overall
That was a pretty good first song. You might want to use stronger word choice and make your lines a little more fluent so they flow together easier. Your future is looking good so far. Keep writing!
#3
Thanks so much for the critique!! I'm going to try and refine it a bit with more vocabulary use and I'll definetly take your advice on the chorus. Thanks man!!