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I like the style of playing. There aren't any chords to speak of, just notes that make good melody. You don't hear that very often. But I'm not sure where you're gonna go with the song. At the moment there is too much missing to really crit the song, other than to say that it's a good start. The playing however, is very good, smooth, and somewhat original compared to todays standards. It'll be very intresting to hear what it sounds like when you get some procussion in there, if you plan to, and actually record it to tracks.

Pretty cool!

Wadester

crit this if you get a chance:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=905082