#1
a girl i know wrote this and wants me to put music to it and fix the lyrics if there are any fixes. all help is much appreciated.

Genre: Acoustic

Every time I think of you
I can’t help but smile
I love you with all my heart
And not a bit less
I want to be with you for the rest of my life

I can’t go a day
Without you in my head
I can’t go a day
Without laying in my bed
Listening to your voice
Hearing you speak every last word
Is this how it’s supposed to be?
You here with me

I listen to that song of ours
It’s running through my head
It doesn’t stop
It never will
Until the day I’m dead

I can’t go a day
Without you in my head
I can’t go a day
Without laying in my bed
Listening to your voice
Hearing you speak every last word
Is this how it’s supposed to be?
You here with me

Nothing goes the way it’s planed
Until I’m there with you
Every time I look around
I wish I saw you

I can’t go a day
Without you in my head
I can’t go a day
Without laying in my bed
Listening to your voice
Hearing you speak every last word
Is this how it’s supposed to be?
You here with me
Last edited by AJS19 at Jul 20, 2008,
#2
waht kind of song is this supposed to be? like an acousticy, a heavy kinda song, or like a boys like girls sorta light, kinda gay rock
#3
there is no fixing this, it's not good, i don't know if i'm just a naturally mean person but, does everyone and there cousin wanna write songs these days?
If you want to shine like the sun first you must burn like it.
#4
:-(
Weell I'm not a good songwriter but this is too plain, it's all been said before in the exact same way and with the exact same words/sentences, sorry, tell your friend to try again and next time speak from her heart and not just the first thing that comes to her mind..and get her a Rhyming dictionary !