#1
All right, the song started off as a black metal number, but then by the end I had added some Opeth like quality to the music. And, it has a solo, which is another oddity for me. Quite shreddy, but stays in key, so that's nice.

Enjoy.
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R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#3
Quote by Necrotic
but the noises were kinda annoying


Heh? Do you mean the MIDI?
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cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
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#4
did much care for it to be honest, it was all too random and the use of the acoustic ruined the song in many parts, the solo had some good points but took too long to get started and the beginning was sub-par.
#5
sounds like megaman
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#6
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it was all too random.


Really? I didn't think it was THAT random.

In fact, it sounds pretty linear (not in the pop sense...).
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#7
power tab
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#8
Demanding are we?
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Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#9
Honestly I didnt like it much at all.
The acoustic killed it.
Some riffs are easily keepers though
#10
I quite liked it. Some of the tremelo picking riffs had an almost 'nautical' quality to them, and the acoustic guitar work was quite good and helped to add variety to it, but it all seemed slightly scrambled. I liked the solo, none of it seemed too forced in, and it gave the song a good kind of progressive feel.

Sorry if the crit is a bit rubbish, it's 1:00 in the morning at I barely slept at all last, and I had too much caffeine

Crit mine?
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#11
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I quite liked it. Some of the tremelo picking riffs had an almost 'nautical' quality to them, and the acoustic guitar work was quite good and helped to add variety to it, but it all seemed slightly scrambled. I liked the solo, none of it seemed too forced in, and it gave the song a good kind of progressive feel.

Sorry if the crit is a bit rubbish, it's 1:00 in the morning at I barely slept at all last, and I had too much caffeine

Crit mine?


Will check in, and after listening to early Cradle of Filth for the first time today...I just noticed some big comparisons between my stuff and theirs .
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B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#12
cradle of filth is awesome!!!!! greatest band ive ever heard in my life.. =D =D
=) =)
#13
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cradle of filth is awesome!!!!! greatest band ive ever heard in my life.. =D =D
=) =)


Fair enough
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Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#15
Oh, definitely. Their newer stuff is decent, but their early stuff is just awesome (Dusk...And Her Embrace is probably in my top 5 black metal albums now).
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cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#16
(i know, i love some of their older stuff, like cradle to enslaved, kinda newer, but still a great song/album =D i also like both albums nymphetamine and thornography.. =))
#17
Meh, I need to give the new stuff a better listen, I only listened to like one song...and I got fed up with it. I'll try it with an open mind this time, though.
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B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#18
ok, try the song devil to the metal, or anything from the album Damnation in a day, it's a great album.. it has the songs Cemetery and Sundown and Better to Reign in Hell, in it.. =)
#19
Alright, will do.

I just need to get over Dusk... first.
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B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

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cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#21
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cradle of filth is awesome!!!!! greatest band ive ever heard in my life.. =D =D
=) =)


Then I pity you. You've never heard any good music.
Sorry, TS, I don't like this.
It seems too spasmodic, I couldn't settle and get into it.
Sorry.
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