If I go if I go if I go if I go
Ooh ooh ooh ooh
Uh huh uh huh uh huh.
Kick-kick-kick-kick start my hair part.
There are many ways to do-do-do-do this.
Magnum condoms.
Heart mugs.
Melt my guts.
Melt my guts.
Melt my guts.
"You remind me of fast food."
"Oh yeah?"
"Because I want to take you out."
"Oh, well aren't you the charmer!"
"Then I want to eat you in my car."

I spent 2/3rds of my life under the idea that to die is to
fuck your nausea out.
You can't melt guts that have turned into snakes.
Poor advice.

That was beautiful.


...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...

...You're still disappointing them...
Unique but very much you. The repetition got a little bit tedious but when it opened up, there was a weird charm. I was left with one of those half smiles at the end and I like that.
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
I agree with jiminizzle, it is very much similar to your style, but seeing as your style is just about everything under the sun, it feels like a contradiction saying that, but anyway.
I really enjoyed this, although it takes time to get into it. The last line in particular needs deep thought to really appreciate it.
I would say the qouted section is the highlight, it brings the whole piece to a more relatable edge and then pushes you off in a very cruel way. Thats what I derived from this - anger.

Digitally Clean
The last line of the first part made me laugh out loud. I wasn't a huge fan of the repetition though. I guess on a scale of flaccid to raging, it gave me a chubby.
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You remind me of Sage Francis for some reason. In a good way.

Agghh skeet, skeet, crit me, skeet, skeet!