#1
Hey guys.



So we have another new original up, and this time it's an instrumental. And yes, it's as Metal as Metal can be (or at least we hope.)



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A9av-WuRBhk



Please be sure to rate, comment, and whatever else. We need you guys's help to become the best band capable within our limits.



Thanks for listening, and PLEASE let us know what you think!
#2
dude!! Thats a way cool jam!! I enjoyed it. The rhythms were great, and the drums fit the song well. The recording quality, well it was live. The only places I really had a problem with it was the in the begining, the drums seemed a little off beat, and then at the end when the clean part came back in, it seemed too abrupt. IMO a fade in to that part might have better suit the song. But then again it was live.

Very good job overall!

Wadester

Crit this if you haven't already:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=905082
#3
Hey I think you guys did a great job.
I loved how it built up and you had the harmonizing guitar almost iron madien like.
Then it would just all fall out and there would be nearly jazzy breakdowns.
I think this would have been a great song to put a lot of lead runs in though I dont know your actual musical abilities ( sound really good though).
I dont know if id call it metal but thats just being picky.


Anyways great job take a look at my song I have up and see if you like it

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Harmonystrat/
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#4
Quote by wadester
dude!! Thats a way cool jam!! I enjoyed it. The rhythms were great, and the drums fit the song well. The recording quality, well it was live. The only places I really had a problem with it was the in the begining, the drums seemed a little off beat, and then at the end when the clean part came back in, it seemed too abrupt. IMO a fade in to that part might have better suit the song. But then again it was live.

Very good job overall!

Wadester

Crit this if you haven't already:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=905082



Thanks a lot for your response!

Yeah, the beggining isn't totally on as far as togetherness goes. And as far as the part towards the end, that is going to be a fade in for sure. But yeah, we felt like we were able to put this guy down in one take, and thankfully it kind of worked, lol.
#5
Since its so long, I'll type this out as the song plays.


Clean intro - almost Opeth-y, its cool.

Harmonized guitar part, awesome riff, but it is at htis point that I realize your song needs bass.

next riff is alright, nothing special.

Very metal stuff going on after this, I like it alot. The drums are just pounding along.

back to "alright riff"

I liked this next thing alot where it would give a blast, and then a quick lead.

Once again loving the clean - I think this is your specialty.

CHUM CHUG CHUG WAAAAHHHH - badass

psycho solo - also badass

The wierd palm muted harmonized part was cool and different.

Next part - maybe a little generic, cool sounding though.

6:04 - 6:34 - I think you spent a little too long on this thing.

I liked this next part, it's metal as hell.

I liked the way the feedback sounded.

Awesome clean/smooth lead thing, and back to the awesome harmonized stuff for a cool ending.


I hope this crit made sense, and was somewhat helpful.

Here's mine if you care to crit.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=909994
#6
Quote by Brain245
Since its so long, I'll type this out as the song plays.


Clean intro - almost Opeth-y, its cool.

Harmonized guitar part, awesome riff, but it is at htis point that I realize your song needs bass.

next riff is alright, nothing special.

Very metal stuff going on after this, I like it alot. The drums are just pounding along.

back to "alright riff"

I liked this next thing alot where it would give a blast, and then a quick lead.

Once again loving the clean - I think this is your specialty.

CHUM CHUG CHUG WAAAAHHHH - badass

psycho solo - also badass

The wierd palm muted harmonized part was cool and different.

Next part - maybe a little generic, cool sounding though.

6:04 - 6:34 - I think you spent a little too long on this thing.

I liked this next part, it's metal as hell.

I liked the way the feedback sounded.

Awesome clean/smooth lead thing, and back to the awesome harmonized stuff for a cool ending.


I hope this crit made sense, and was somewhat helpful.

Here's mine if you care to crit.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=909994


Thanks for your crit man. I really appreciate it

Those empty parts are going to be filled out in the actual recording with bass and rhythm guitar and what not. It's going to be pretty well layered, so it should be sounding pretty full.

Thanks again for your comment!