I've come up to a problem in writing a melody to fit a lyric, here are the lyrics being used:

I’ve been sitting all alone
I can't bare it any more
I must get away from here
The mind turning to bone
The shadow on the floor

And attached is a zip with a GP4/5 and a Midi of what they are currently being fit it to, do they fit? How can I make them fit better?
All I want is for everyone to go to hell...
...It's the last place I was seen before I lost myself

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