#1
I've been travelling around
Don't know where to go
Looking for a girl
That will love me so

When will I see her?
How will I know?
When I think i'm in love
I find that its just not so

So please
Please ease my mind
All i need is a little love
And someone to treat me right.

Like a stray needle
Trapped in a bowl
My heart points everwhere
But it just won't know

I try to speak my feelings
I try not to fall
But all it does is
Get my engine stalled

So please
Why does love seem so far?
Is it just out of reach,
Or is it not for me at all?

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace." - Jimi Hendrix
#2
I like your rhyming here; it actually works and sounds great. The flow is good and the lyrics seem to reveal something about the writer, which is gutsy!

Haha, I sense a little desperation. If you were actually going to polish this/ perform it, I would tone it down just a tad bit. Then again, the effect of complete honesty...maybe it would work out well?

Anyway, keep up the good work and I like the Jimi Hendrix quote.

This one's mine, if you have the time. I'd really appreciate it.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=15268846#post15268846