#1
We can't be what we want to be
Empty promises will set us free
Wait for the claw to pick us all
But not because we need it at all
What was life but a one night fling
Want the best you need the best
Tie us up and leave the rest
Unwilling hauled off to war
Take my mind and I'll take yours
Tried and true, red, white, and blue
Not so many words only f**k you
Right or left, life and death
Tell us to speak and take our breath
#2
*reported*


please read the rules in the announcement at the top of this forum.
pay particular attention to the section on posting limits.


EDIT to below:
I'll tell you if you repost it after the appropriate amount of time.
Don't make a habit of posting on reported threads.
Being a newbie, you'll be given some slack for that this time.
But you won't get that courtesy many times.
Meadows
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#3
thanks for the advice. My friend showed me this site and I never even thought to look at the rules. I appreciate that. What did you think of the piece.