#1
This is my first attempt at writing lyrics BTW


and they all just disappear
soon after they are satisfied
you think you can crush me
but there is one thing
you cannot take from me
#4
whats the time signature? whats the tempo?
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#5
Sorry mate, you've put this in the wrong forum. You should read the rules and that.

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#7
OK well you can try

and they all just disappear
soon after they are all satisfied
you think you can crush me some more
but there is one thing
you cannot take from me
#8
Quote by whitkyle3
OK well you can try

and they all just disappear
soon after they are all satisfied
you think you can crush me some more
but there is one thing
you cannot take from me


that makes the line really weak, though. at least leave the 'some' out
#9
ok so this is what i have now :/


and they all just disappear
soon after they're satisfied
you think you can crush me
but there's one thing
you cannot take from me

Quote by Bair
whats the time signature? whats the tempo?


sorry but i was just writing lyrics, i dont have a song to go with it yet :S
Last edited by penguinsauce at Jul 15, 2008,
#10
and they all just disappear
soon after they are satisfied
you think you can crush me
but there is one thing you can't take!

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#11
Quote by Danno13
and they all just disappear
soon after they are satisfied
you think you can crush me
but there is one thing you can't take!

?



yes this is alot better

THANKS!