#1
Some more of my lyrics...This one is titled meeting infinity.

I'm here at the end of the world
"How are you infinity?"
I've heard every one talk about you
And how they love eachother all the way here.
And i don't care why it happened or how
I'm just glad it happened somehow

To contemplate the horizon from here
and see the city lights like stars
Opens my eyes
Opens my eyes.(x2)

I'm here at the end of the world
"How are you infinity?"
It took me ages to get here
Are you wondering why i'm standing here.
Because they told me she was here.
They told me she was here
And there she is..

To contemplate the horizon from here
and see the city lights like stars
Opens my eyes
Opens my eyes.(x2)

And with the lights guiding the path
I'll drive us away, as you
Close your beautiful eyes
And avoid the storm tonight.
"Well aren't we doomed in this beautiful day"
#2
This felt so science-fiction. It was awesome!

I liked the story. I don't know how 'How are you infinity' would actually sound in a song without sounding a little 'corny' but with the right melody, I think it could be powerful instead. Anyway, keep up the writing because your lyrics are actually interesting to read.

Take a look, if you would like. I would definetely value your critique!!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=909791