#2
critting while listening

your playing could be a bit cleaner. the drums need work. the Vocals need ALOT of work. I like the melody of the song though It just needs to clean up some. use less distortion on the solos.

I'll give it a 5.5 of ten and blame about points on vocals and 3 on the recording quality which you don't have much control over.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=15289721#post15289721

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=910834
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#3
haha! I liked the little laugh thing in the beginning. That was cool. And the vocals-only thing at the end was a good way to end it. The song was a little short, and the vocals do need some work. Other than that it seemed like a good song. Catchy melody.

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