This is just nit picky. The rhythm intro part with the chorus sounds too mellow to me. But the playing is great.
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wow, tacklin my fav song!

the mellow intro mentioned by artemis isn't bad. i liked that part.

the harmonic in the intro solo wasn't in my taste but i can see why a fan of BLS would throw that in there. but besides some other little tid bits here in there it was good! good job dude!
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The harmonic was a natural and it was a mistake lol.
I'm thinking of doing the whole thing but the tempo changes in the middle of the song i'll let you know when the other half is up
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