#1
Well I don't record very often ('cause I kind of suck) but I felt like doing it because.... well I dunno. Here's the thing: you rate it, I rate yours. So give some constructice criticism please!

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#3
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you kind of suck?

lol?
hardly


Well that's always nice to hear what did you think about the song then?
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#4
well first off.. interesting name for a song.. what inspired that

great song overall, good rhythm. and the song doesnt bore the listener.
i like the synth and piano in the backround, it is a nice touch
and also you have very nice tone
i really liked it

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#6
lol suck? that was amazing lol.a

I like it thought. some nice harmonies goin on there. great recording quality. I like your lead sound it's good. I like the rrythym sound to it's just a but more dead imo. I like the riff at about 1:30. The drums could come up in the mix just a LITTLE bit. I like the little string thing or whatever it is in the background it sounds good. The solo at around 3 mintutes had couple of wrong notes but other than that great job man.

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#7
Sweet. Favorite part is all of the harmonized stuff. The production is of course excellent, better than most people on here can get. I noticed just a few timing issues, but you did a way better job than I could with that.

Songwritingwise, the only thing I didn't really like was the fade-out, it seemed like you should have just ended it, know what I mean? Just my opinion though.

And the song name is badass. I wanna see them make a movie about the homosexual knight of the round table. It would be better than most of the **** out there today.

I liked your Gunsmoke piece too, its kinda Maidenish but with a different sort of spin on it.

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#8
Great song, liked the piano part, and solos, everything seems to flow perfectly.

I think that the fade out was a bit ok, but it could be better with a proper ending.

8/10

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#9
Thanks for all the criticism! Just a question though, do you think that I should have the solo in the end, or do you just think I should write a better solo?
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#10
Amazing stuff. Everything went really well together.
And no man.. u do not suck!
#11
Which one is it? I assumed it was the Knight one
It has a nice rhythm. very catchy
Nice title too

I liked the ending starting from 2:20. And I think you should keep the solo, its a good one, but of course do try to write a better one

I know my crit is lame and short but

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#12
this is a pretty good song. the only thing i don't like is the drums at the beginning, they kind of sound like computer drums. Besides that, the guitars and the solo was really good, and the keyboards fit in with the song well.
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#14
Quote by cob666
this is a pretty good song. the only thing i don't like is the drums at the beginning, they kind of sound like computer drums. Besides that, the guitars and the solo was really good, and the keyboards fit in with the song well.


That's because they are computer drums

I'm sorry but I am a very crappy drummer, so I have to resort to things like that...

Thinking of purchasing EZdrummer though, is it any good?
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#15
I agree with the other comments, it was really good, didnt get old.

Only thing i didnt like was the very end, i think it would sound better with a definitive ending, and it could do without the cliche tapping at the end lol


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#16
Pretty sweet stuff. Nice melodies. Definatley worth a listening to. Liked the part at 1:10 the most, it has some pretty sweet feeling to it. The other parts feel pretty mechanic.

The piano part had some nice feeling to it aswell.

About the solo, it was pretty cool. Pretty rocky. You decide if you want to write a melodic solo or keep it as it is. I personally prefer more designed/bending solos than the fast pentatonic or minor/major scaling.

Overall, great.
#17
That was pretty good man you definitely have some talent. Recording quality was pretty good. Heck WAY better than what mine sounds like. Anyways the riffs were awesome i thought the solo was a good solid rock solo. Drums did sound computer-like though as said above. Keyboard fit in pretty well also.

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#18
thanks for the crit man... straight off, i love this song. wouldnt say you suck! youre writing and playing better than most of the other people around here :P correct me if im wrong, but i think i heard some bodom inspired licks and bits floating around definately my kinda thing haha, nice. you should try changing the piano to a string section and seeing how it comes out. nice work man, i enjoyed this
#19
Very nice rhythm parts. Good crunchy rhythm tone too. The harmonized sections sound really cool too. Sounds quite Children of Bodom-ish but more happy

The solo section is very Alexi like aswell. Some nice phrasings but a little back in the mix - on the first solo. The second solo sounded good too - You can certainly play well.

I liked the riff at 1.26. Sounded really cool.


As for EZDrummer, It's a really awesome program - I use it. Sounds very real and is easy to use, so I recommend it for sure.
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