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Haha, I enjoyed the title. It's motivational.

The flow was generally good. I didn't understand the 'must i fish you out.' Then again, it's a song. 'Day by day we complain' was my favorite line so I'm glad it was in th chorus. Overall, this was pretty good. I don't know how this would fit with a melody but you wrote it so you probably have something in mind! Keep up the good work!

If you want to, you could review mine and I would totally appreciate the feedback.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=911488