#1
I've been writing a story for some creative writing story and we have to do a story of the gothic genre. So far I've got that a man comes to my house and stabs me and then I wake up in hospital and at night the man appeared and told me to kill someone so I did and he put me in a deep sleep leaving the dead body. But I'm stuck on what to write now so any suggestions would be alot of help.

Thanks

P.S I'm not going to write about lol wut pears, fapping etc so just don't say it
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#2
For a moment I didn't see the comma between lolwut pears and fapping...

Damn mental images...
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#3
Zeus should appear and sort everything out.
Deus ex machina ftw?


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Make a scene climax by adding a vampire who challenges you to a duel, but then dr octagonopus comes and shoops everyone into a pile of dust on the floor.
#6
Well you awaken from your sleep then fly away on your fanciful Unicorn. You embark on a long and treacherous journey to the man's lair. When you reach his castle of chaos you find yourself surrounded by gargoyles. Then the only way for you to win is to use a spirit bomb on the castle, destroying everyone in it but not before you swoop down and save the girl on your trusty steed. Do this all before bedtime.
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#7
i'd like to help, but i cant picture what's happenning within your story, it just seems really random. perhaps the guy should wake up and find his lover lying next to him, dead. and then when he tells the police, they accuse him and he runs away, and the police chase him.
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#8
Does TS know the plot of Fahrenheit/Indigo Prophecy?
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Does TS know the plot of Fahrenheit/Indigo Prophecy?


No I don't
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Zeus should appear and sort everything out.

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Just put vampires in it. And tapestries.

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Make a scene climax by adding a vampire who challenges you to a duel, but then dr octagonopus comes and shoops everyone into a pile of dust on the floor.

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Well you awaken from your sleep then fly away on your fanciful Unicorn. You embark on a long and treacherous journey to the man's lair. When you reach his castle of chaos you find yourself surrounded by gargoyles. Then the only way for you to win is to use a spirit bomb on the castle, destroying everyone in it but not before you swoop down and save the girl on your trusty steed. Do this all before bedtime.


Now this is why you don't ask a bunch of guitarists for help on your creative writing work.


I personally like to do Creative Writing, but the goth genre isn't really in my spectrum of expertise. Your story sounds a little too fantastical for a goth story though.

But your gonna have to figure out why the guy stabs him. Was the knife he used only used to temporarily put the man into a coma? Did he stab him, make him fall into a coma, in order to tell him a message (knowing he would be jumpy if he hadn't of calmed him down)?

So the guy tells him to kill a man... then he puts him into a coma again after he does so.


Honestly, I think you should scratch your entire idea. It doesn't make sense. You should have a good vision of what you want to do in a story before you even start it. If you don't even know any of the technical aspects of a story, there is no reason for you to proceed in writing it.

Think ahead. Think what you want your story to be about. Then start adding in details of what characters are in it. Add in your plot - but make sure the movement of your plot stays true to your characters actions. If your stuck on something where your not sure how it should outcome, I suggest you write all the outcomes and choose the best one afterwards.

... I can't really say much more, because your whole storyline is a little bizzare, not making any sense.
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The story begins on a cold New York night, when Lucas Kane, in a possessed trance, stabs a man to death in the restroom of an East Side diner and then flees the scene in confusion. His crime is set against a backdrop of similar ritualistic murders and falling temperatures (hence the name). He then has to try and find out what happened to him.

Obviously the plot is much more complicated than that, but that's a basic outline.
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Yeah, that's a good start to the story.

Then make it so that you have a dream, and can only leave the coma you're in if you can go back in time and save the life of a loved one.

Don't forget to name the story after a David Bowie song!