#4
sounds great, finally a change on this website from people promoting their death metal bands
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#5
the only criticism i have after listening to all the songs is to try to change up the beginnings somewhat because they all start and revolve around the first note and it gets a little repetative, just trying to give advice though, sounds great, super relaxing music
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#7
"Goin On A Journey (Take 2)" has a nice riff but it gets kinda boring by the end of the song. If you added a few different parts in I think it would sound a lot better. It's a very laid back tune and I quite like it, but be aware that the average listener does not have a great attention span so you need to keep their attention somehow.

"The Chase" sounds really good too. It reminds me of walking through a desert...okay, so I've never actually walked through a desert, but if I were walking through a desert this would probably be playing. I like this tune more because it feels like there is enough going to keep the listener interested for the entire song.

"Goin On A Journey (Take 1)" sounds basically the same as Take 2 to me at least for the intro. I'm not sure which take I like better, I don't notice any changes that really punch me in the face.

Hooray! Slide guitar! "Bliss" sounds terrific and quite relaxing. Now I feel like I'm in a prison sitting around with a nail file filing my nails down as a notorious individual approaches. Then the music changes and I don't feel like that anymore. This is my favourite tune.

Overall I quite like your stuff, but agree that the first three songs sound a tad repetitive (which is okay since two are the same song...). I really enjoyed the slide guitar, and I think your tunes would fit well to a movie set in a prison camp in the desert or something.


If you've got a chance take a listen to my acoustic work and let me know what you think - any and all comments are appreciated. http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=914968