#1
okay so I just started this about 10 mins ago, it's my first time writing lyrics.
so far I've only done an intro and first verse, but I just wanna hear your feedback

In my mind i hear the asterisked sections being screamed
so yeah think of this as hardcore rock genre (alexisonfire style)

Thanks guys (or gals)


*****
There's a new theme to this story
Times have changed and I am the witness
The trial starts, the accounts are open
but they're running low now the moments have passed
*****

I won't start from page number 1
I tore it out the moment things turned red
and now the inks run out
just like our time


comments?

Thankyou