#1
Lead me to your paradise

I’ve got a feeling
Deep inside of me
It makes me wiggle
It makes me laugh
There’s nothing
I can do about that
Only you, honey,
Can make it real

You made my head spin around
You’ve set my heart on fire
Now don’t you leave me here
Take my hand
Lead me to your paradise, honey
A place where I wanna be
Lead me to your paradise, honey
That gives us pleasure

I knew it
The moment I saw you
You walked so graceful
Shaking your hips
Your beautiful hair
Shined in the sunlight
A body that only can be
From a goddess
The prettiest girl
On earth, yeah

You made my head spin around
You’ve set my heart on fire
Now don’t you leave me here
Take my hand
Lead me to your paradise, honey
A place where I wanna be
Lead me to your paradise, honey
That gives us pleasure
#2
I really like it man,
I'm assuming the beat would sort of be soemthing from like ben harper?
The lyrics are beautiful....thye have meaning..adn they tell a story. So in my mind you;ve got everything a song needs.

good job
if u can..crit mine

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=827411
"You've got to dance like nobody else is watching.
Dream like you will live forever.
Live like you're going to die tomorrow,
and love like it is never gonna hurt."
-- James Dean (1931-1955)

Quote by JakeTheDuck
This man has the right idea.


^
oh yeahhh