so i just wrote this song it's a 3 chord (c---g---f--c-g-) progression and i need to know if my lyrics blow : /

i should've said this a long long time ago
but at the time there was no way i could know
that the smiles and tears were one in the same

i've always told you the truth about how i feel
but i never thought you though that i was real
i thought you thought that i was just playin a game

so i won't promise you the mountains or the sea
and i can't promise you that i will be

a good man, a better man, or any man indeed
but i promise i'll be a man if you're still listening
a strong man, a stronger man or any man but me
but i promise i'll be a man if you'll be with me...

DONT be nice!!!