arcains_valor
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2006
744 IQ
#2
That's actually pretty tight. I think it needs some work. But those are some really good ideas. You need another guitar, better drums, bass, vocals. This could turn out to be a badass song. I really liked the string part. Awsome job!

Do you mind critting one of mine? Orange Martian would be the preferred song. Thanks.