#1
Verse 1.
i'll never have you and that is why i die,
you're the devils noose i slipped right in,
the end is close i feel it in my pulse,
but do you even care about me,
but would you even think about me,

Chorus
you know i know you know I love you,
you do,
you know i know you know I hate myself,
you do,
you know I know you know I love you,
you do,
you do
you do

Verse 2
I hate that I love you,
you know i do,
but thats your fun,
knowing your killing me,
it gives you your kicks,
i kiss your lips and life goobye,
inside I die
but its not my time.

Chorus.

outro
you do,
you do,
X4

Edit: do you think this song is good as i'm scared it will come off as emo ramblings, also this is a song for my grunge band so it will have quite a bit of distortion and possibly a noise solo.
Quote by Les Paul Ell
they like you BECAUSE you've got a hot girlfriend. They see you and think, "woah, there must be something special bout him!" and they're gagging for it so they like you too. And it's kinda funny cos you won your current girlfriend over in a raffle.
Last edited by creepimariddle at Jul 19, 2008,
#4
Quote by KileManA7X
This is pretty good! Hope this dosn't offend you but I think it could be a good disco song

there are dj decks in the place we practice, but I don't think we want to go down that disco route.
Quote by Les Paul Ell
they like you BECAUSE you've got a hot girlfriend. They see you and think, "woah, there must be something special bout him!" and they're gagging for it so they like you too. And it's kinda funny cos you won your current girlfriend over in a raffle.