#1
I have some simple lyrics and chord progression. My first lyrics, judge fairly.


Take your time
Hurry up
Im sure im not sure of what
Yeah thats me
Not near you
God not another one
Heres your life
Now give it back
Im not sure what I wonder
Here we go
I already stopped
Take one for America

Then run away
Run to another place
I need you here
So ran away
Back to Y2K

Wheres your shame boy
Heres your shame boy

Way back when
We were new
I was clueless to what you want
Everyday
That I look back
I still want it all

Then run away
Run to another place
I need you here
So ran away
Back to Y2K

Wheres your shame boy
Heres your shame boy

Wheres your mind
Anymore
So they say its still part of you
Now and then
I'll hurry up
But my heads back there
I hate you
I can't give you up
The song remains the same
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#2
Kurt Cobains handworks clearly shine from your works. Though are pretty good but I'd still do some fixing right there 'cause this song seems like u haven't hadden an idea what are you writing. Though that is all ok 'cause I know hundreds and hundreds of popular band who do the same thing. I think this song would work really well in a bar or a consert in a country that main language isn't english but if you go to a pub in london with this one, they will probably not be really impressed.
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