#1
I have a new song, entitled "The Dangers of Myspace". I'll definitely crit yours if you crit mine. Here are the lyrics, hopefully it will entice you to listen:

One thousand million emo kids
Putting their souls up for bids
To a man without shame
The man who I now blame

For starting all this crap
They all used to like rap
But now they stay inside
And cut themselves and cry

Because this guy named Thomas
Has them brainwashed, I promise
With use of his website
Myspace has become a blight

Now when he makes the command
These emo kids will stand
They'll march on Washington and kill the government
After that, Tommy boy will make his descent

Upon the White house to become president
And all his time will have been well spent
He'll turn this country into emo moosh
That's the only scenario where we'd all miss Bush


So anyhow, come to my myspace and listen to this one and if you haven't heard my others from my previous posts in this forum, then give those a listen. Please tell me what you think.

myspace.com/johnirvingmusic

Thanks UG.

I have a Pear for my banner. Hope that doesn't get me in trouble...
I'm not a fan of facts. You see, the facts can change, but my opinion will never change, no matter what the facts are. - Stephen Colbert

Last edited by Link.JohnIrving at Jul 20, 2008,
#2
haha- seriously reminds me of tenatious D kinda short though maybe needs a chorus

actually all your songs remind me of Tenatious D
the lyrics are all funny but overall the guitar playing parts are pretty simple and sometimes a little rough

but halarious good job

crit my vid http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZlaopV_NHuE
My Gear

Epiphone Les Paul Standard
Epiphone Elitist Paul Mccartney Texan
Orange Tiny Terror
Vox Valvetronix AD 30
Vox V847 Wah
Metal Muff EQ (broken )
Boss RC-2 Loop pedal

Me playing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0unpDZFIWA
#3
Thanks man. I'm pretty new to guitar playing (1 year) but I've been writing comedy poetry for years so it was time to make songs out of some of my faves.

I commented on your vid. Anyone else?
I'm not a fan of facts. You see, the facts can change, but my opinion will never change, no matter what the facts are. - Stephen Colbert